Not a Good holiday!

Had you ever feel that all is against you? Two years ago we were in U.S.A. and it was a holiday.1) My family and me decided to go either Best Buy, Tony Roma’s(a restaurant), or staid at home. We decided to go to Best Buy.2) Best Buy is cool, fun, and interesting. With many electronic things.3) We buy some games, movies, and we search for more things. When we finish buying all the things we went to the car to put all the things we buy because we were going to the fourth floor to buy some sport equipments.4) Just imagine that when you came to the car, you are happy because you are going to play with you ps2 games, and when you open the car someone had still you all your things. Hopefully they didn’t still us the van.

5)In Best Buy, they gave you a little paper that if a game comes damage you could change it. My father needed to buy the games again because he didn’t have the little paper.6) When my father buy us the games, we went home. We needed to go to Alamo.7) Arriving to Alamo, we discovered that we left the papers tou change our van.8) Oh, what a terrible day.

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